Need feedback on my lyrical nightstep videos

[Nightstep Realm]

Hi I've just started out making lyrical videos of nightstep music on my channel and I need feedback on it, like whether if the timing of the lyrics is good enough and how I can improve my channel and attract more viewers.

 

[TheMileHighFiveClub]

I think you're displaying too many lyrics at once, in the verses of the bring me to life clip anyway. One line at a time would be much better than two, the best way to do these videos i feel, would be a word at a time, as the people sing it the words pop up and stay onscreen until the next line of the song. That's a lot more work though, but it would be more enjoyable to watch.

You definitely need a channel banner and to make some kind of appealing thumbnails too. But i'm sure if you just keep pumping out multiple videos a week the people will come.

 

[Nightstep Realm]

I think you're displaying too many lyrics at once, in the verses of the bring me to life clip anyway. One line at a time would be much better than two, the best way to do these videos i feel, would be a word at a time, as the people sing it the words pop up and stay onscreen until the next line of the song. That's a lot more work though, but it would be more enjoyable to watch.

You definitely need a channel banner and to make some kind of appealing thumbnails too. But i'm sure if you just keep pumping out multiple videos a week the people will come.

Thank you for the review, bring me to life was my first video and I had just used a random editor for it so couldn't precisely time the lyrics good enough. For the numb video I used Sony Vegas I hope that was good enough? once I'm good enough with the timing I'll try to do it in one line. Btw do you happen to know any easier editor for lyrics?

 

[TheMileHighFiveClub]

Thank you for the review, bring me to life was my first video and I had just used a random editor for it so couldn't precisely time the lyrics good enough. For the numb video I used Sony Vegas I hope that was good enough? once I'm good enough with the timing I'll try to do it in one line. Btw do you happen to know any easier editor for lyrics?

Numb is very similar, two lines at once which is a lot of words on screen before they actually sing them. I don't know any specific programs for lyrics, i use sony vegas as well, which does the trick nicely.