Need feedback on my latest video - Trippin' Tea

[SteriousFilms]

If you could watch and give me advice I would really appreciate.
The other guy that does the films with me bailed at the last second so I had to come up with something solo, so I am really insecure about this one
Don't forget to subscribe if you like it, but be honest if you don't and let me know here ahahah
Thank you very much![DOUBLEPOST=1349900942,1349900827][/DOUBLEPOST]Sorry had forgotten to embed it, here it is:

 

[BulletBlacc]

" what is this? What is happening to me?" i wasnt buying that line but it was good till that part

 

[SteriousFilms]

" what is this? What is happening to me?" i wasnt buying that line but it was good till that part

Allright thanks for the feedback!