Need a Vlog Critique Please!

LifeOfTeel

LifeOfTeel

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If you wouldn't mind Checking out my Videos and letting me know what you think?

Specific things I'm looking for critiques on:

1: Thumbnail
2: Intro
3: Flow of scenes
4: Watch-ability of entire vlog
5: Outro

All thoughts are welcome! it will just make me better.
(note: please mostly base your review from my most recent vlogs I have made some changes to things from the past, but feel free to watch the earlier vlogs to see what changes have been made =)....)

Here is my most recent vlog
 
Hey, let's get into it:

== 1: Thumbnail

Your photos look good, I'd try a differnet font for the text and adhering to the rule of thirds for the composition of the image. That should help a lot in terms of order and percieved quality of the thumbnails.

== 2: Intro

3-4 seconds of talking, 3-4 short intro cut with branding, rest of the video sounds like a way to build up tension

== 3: Flow of scenes

just noticed your intro is 1 minute into the video, that's a bit late I would say. Also I feel like you are doning great in cuts, but when the interesting part of the scene is over you hesitate a lot with the out cut, which drastically reduces the speed of the video.

== 4: Watch-ability of entire vlog

You have the material to make great vlog videos and I'd day right now the only thing that is missing is the intro and the right cutting. Other than that the quality is decent and the sound is good as well.

== 5: Outro

Outro is deliciously great - but because of the points mentioned below there might be not as many people watching it as there should.

All in all, if you work on the editing and building tension at the beginning I feel your channel will be much more subscribable.
 
iamvroom said:
Hey, let's get into it:

== 1: Thumbnail

Your photos look good, I'd try a differnet font for the text and adhering to the rule of thirds for the composition of the image. That should help a lot in terms of order and percieved quality of the thumbnails.

== 2: Intro

3-4 seconds of talking, 3-4 short intro cut with branding, rest of the video sounds like a way to build up tension

== 3: Flow of scenes

just noticed your intro is 1 minute into the video, that's a bit late I would say. Also I feel like you are doning great in cuts, but when the interesting part of the scene is over you hesitate a lot with the out cut, which drastically reduces the speed of the video.

== 4: Watch-ability of entire vlog

You have the material to make great vlog videos and I'd day right now the only thing that is missing is the intro and the right cutting. Other than that the quality is decent and the sound is good as well.

== 5: Outro

Outro is deliciously great - but because of the points mentioned below there might be not as many people watching it as there should.

All in all, if you work on the editing and building tension at the beginning I feel your channel will be much more subscribable.
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Thank you!
That is very constructive advice I really do appreciate that. I agree with everything you said and I am going to work on it right away. Hopefully my next Vlog on knocks that all off the list! thanks again!
 
LifeOfTeel said:
Thank you!
That is very constructive advice I really do appreciate that. I agree with everything you said and I am going to work on it right away. Hopefully my next Vlog on knocks that all off the list! thanks again!
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GL looking forward to see the result :)
 
agree with previous post but just wanted too add.... That Singer.... I really hope they didn't pay her for that Haha if so, I need too change my profession to bad singer : o
 
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