piaiscool
I've Got It
I checked out the video, and I think your concept is great, tbh.
But most people would have no patience for 17 minutes of footage unless they can really relate to it.
For example, I'm very new to YouTube. So I know people wouldn't want to watch me for 20 minutes when I'm just a newbie. So I try to keep videos under 5 minutes as much as possible for now until a build a base of viewers that are actually willing to watch longer videos.
Editing is fine, you'll become more adept to it. You have a great start!
But most people would have no patience for 17 minutes of footage unless they can really relate to it.
For example, I'm very new to YouTube. So I know people wouldn't want to watch me for 20 minutes when I'm just a newbie. So I try to keep videos under 5 minutes as much as possible for now until a build a base of viewers that are actually willing to watch longer videos.
Editing is fine, you'll become more adept to it. You have a great start!

We both like Steve Bruhl and were influenced by him and both do a drunk voice (I do it A LOT). I knew when I first saw his Star Fox Adventures reviews years ago, before I even planned to do Youtube videos, that if I did something like that, I couldn't really be myself because I'd end up looking like a copy of him. That's a big reason I've kicked up the randomness. My next review will actually be a review though (in keeping with my "system") and I'm going to reign it in while trying to be different in general and different from Jontron.