My New Outro!

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Is this is a good outro template? Ima start on my intro tomorrow, but is this good? Also ,what music do you think goes well with this outro?
 

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All art should be a reflection of your channel and videos in some form or fashion. I don't see how any of this reflects Tech News. Why do you have a plate and a cup? Why is the Facebook logo smaller than the Twitter logo? Why is the G+ logo tilted (that's technically forbidden usage of the logo)? Why does the Twitter and Facebook have white behind them but the G+ doesn't? Why do you have all the smoke in the background? I can't read the text, either because the color clashes with the smoke.

Definitely not trying to be harsh or sarcastic. Those are real questions. Design is about communication. Clearly you want to communicate "subscribe". That's in bright yellow and not hard to miss. That part is good. Your social network icons are very easily noticeable. That's good, too. But everything else around them is screaming distraction and doesn't make much sense with everything else. Plates and cups don't go with smoke, unless for some reason they do. And if that's the case, it's not clear why.

My first video has a disgusting intro in it. It's stupid. I was messing around in After Effects and I found this effect and in the moment it looked cool and I wanted to open my video with something, so I slapped it in there. Looking back on it, it didn't really do anything. It's so dumb. And it doesn't make any sense. It's like "okay." I say that to say, keep it simple.
 
sirkibble2 said:
All art should be a reflection of your channel and videos in some form or fashion. I don't see how any of this reflects Tech News. Why do you have a plate and a cup? Why is the Facebook logo smaller than the Twitter logo? Why is the G+ logo tilted (that's technically forbidden usage of the logo)? Why does the Twitter and Facebook have white behind them but the G+ doesn't? Why do you have all the smoke in the background? I can't read the text, either because the color clashes with the smoke.

Definitely not trying to be harsh or sarcastic. Those are real questions. Design is about communication. Clearly you want to communicate "subscribe". That's in bright yellow and not hard to miss. That part is good. Your social network icons are very easily noticeable. That's good, too. But everything else around them is screaming distraction and doesn't make much sense with everything else. Plates and cups don't go with smoke, unless for some reason they do. And if that's the case, it's not clear why.

My first video has a disgusting intro in it. It's stupid. I was messing around in After Effects and I found this effect and in the moment it looked cool and I wanted to open my video with something, so I slapped it in there. Looking back on it, it didn't really do anything. It's so dumb. And it doesn't make any sense. It's like "okay." I say that to say, keep it simple.
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It's not for the chanel linked in below, it's for a gaming channel. The smoke is just a background, and also the plate is like a meal, serving up social networks, and we threq the spoiled food out, which is Google +. It's tilted because I want it to be in the trash. There's no annotation there.
 
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