My First Video!!!

[WannaBeDerp]

This is my first video, I'd love to get some feedback on my style of editing and the video in general....

 

[FPSAmerica]

I'm FPSAmerica and I'd love to give you some feedback as soon as I can. Right now I can't watch your video because I'm in school. When I can I will. Glad to see you on youtube