My First Video Post

Ninja Flyboy

Ninja Flyboy

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Hey Everyone,
Here is the first video that I have posted on this forum. What do you think? Any suggestions?
Thanks for your time.

 
Only thing is it doesn't seem genuine well I mean, are you supposed to be talking while riding? Cause it sounds like a voice-over - would be a lot more interesting to talk as you ride, though i don't condone it cause I ride too and it could be distracting. I've seen a lot of riders talk as they do ride/record and to me IMO is a lot funner to watch. Your commentary isn't bad, got some good jokes in there though. Thumbnails look kinda messy - I'd clean it up a bit.
 
iMSaiyan said:
Only thing is it doesn't seem genuine well I mean, are you supposed to be talking while riding? Cause it sounds like a voice-over - would be a lot more interesting to talk as you ride, though i don't condone it cause I ride too and it could be distracting. I've seen a lot of riders talk as they do ride/record and to me IMO is a lot funner to watch. Your commentary isn't bad, got some good jokes in there though. Thumbnails look kinda messy - I'd clean it up a bit.
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Actually, I am talking while I'm riding. I use the Sena 20S with High Definition Audio and noise cancelling and a few adjustments to the microphone. I also use a neck curtain so there is no wind sound at all.
I did cut, splice, and remove some voice to make the overall flow smoother.
As for the Thumbnails, I'll continue to work on those.
Thanks for the feedback.
 
I would say get rid of the black bars on the side ( theyre never a good thing lol ) and instead of just having your logo in the bottom right you should have a watermark, because it's literally the exact same thing except looks sharper and actually has functionality
 
ThreeProng said:
I would say get rid of the black bars on the side ( theyre never a good thing lol ) and instead of just having your logo in the bottom right you should have a watermark, because it's literally the exact same thing except looks sharper and actually has functionality
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I'm not sure which black bars on the side you're referring to. Help me out please.
 
Ninja Flyboy said:
I'm not sure which black bars on the side you're referring to. Help me out please.
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Oh my bad, I guess it just happens when you embed your video onto this site ( was referring to black bars on left and right ), I clicked on the youtube video link and it didn't show up there.
 
ThreeProng said:
Oh my bad, I guess it just happens when you embed your video onto this site ( was referring to black bars on left and right ), I clicked on the youtube video link and it didn't show up there.
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K. Had me worried there for a second. Thought I was missing something.
Thanks again.
 
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