My first video! Feedback? Help a brother out!

Froku

Froku

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There is a link to the first video on my channel and although it isn't amazing I'd like some feedback.

Here's the link again :p
 
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Hey, the idea of doing pictures over your story is pretty cool and you kept the video nice, short and snappy which is good.

I think you could bring the audio of your voice up in relation to the background music and maybe just slow down a bit when you are talking which will make it much easier for you and also for us to understand. You can do more than one take- keep going till you get it how you want it, we only end up hearing the best one afterall!
 
Well welcome in the youtube world. It's obvious that being this your first video there are lots of things you need to improve, especially for the audio. I'm guessing you are speaking close to your mic because I could hear your nose-breathing so maybe you should stay a little bit far from it. The video is ok, maybe it's only because I'm not so much in this type of videos but I didn't find it so interesting (maybe you just need to find your niche). Of course the channel layout must change, you need the advanced layout where you have an homepage with all the sections (videos, uploads, playlist, about...). Nice banner and logo so keep going bro!
 
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