CDBelvedere
I've Got It
This is the first time ive ever spoken without playing a game, and I could really do with some feedback

Do I sound like im struggling with it or anything? Im used to doing LP's instead of commentaries! And I know! Suprised I dont have masses of dislikes from CoD fans!A commentary that isn't battlefield or call of duty!? WHAT WITCHCRAFT IS THIS!?!? Seriously though, that was pretty good, if you are going to do more, I'd suggest making a pointers sheet or a script before recording so you actually have stuff to talk about, because like you said yourself, you only did this to announce you weren't going to upload in July and then just rambled on a bit at the end because you wanted to show the end of the gameplay.
Do I sound like im struggling with it or anything? Im used to doing LP's instead of commentaries! And I know! Suprised I dont have masses of dislikes from CoD fans!