My first comedic rant, would love some feedback :)

LordMongrel

LordMongrel

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Hey guys, I just posted my first video on my channel. It's a comedic rant on WHAT I HATE ABOUT MCDONALD'S, I would really appreciate feedback and constructive criticism on how I can improve my videos.

Here's the link to my video:
 
You have a off brand GradeAUnderA feel mixed with Chris Rock to your videos. Not bad, but similar style. Kind of amusing actually. Keep it up man!
 
This is the realness when it comes to describing pretty much every McDs in the world loool
I think you kinda sound like Dave Chappelle and can imagine that it took you a bit to put all the cartoons in the video (have no idea how the actual process of that goes but I think it's a bit harder than editing a recording).

I would say good work, made me giggle at times. I liked this video and I don't think any drastic alteration of it is needed. It's charming in a way as it is, artwork makes sense.

Keep it up :)
 
TMasle said:
This is the realness when it comes to describing pretty much every McDs in the world loool
I think you kinda sound like Dave Chappelle and can imagine that it took you a bit to put all the cartoons in the video (have no idea how the actual process of that goes but I think it's a bit harder than editing a recording).

I would say good work, made me giggle at times. I liked this video and I don't think any drastic alteration of it is needed. It's charming in a way as it is, artwork makes sense.

Keep it up :)
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Haha the editing was a NIGHTMARE, making this took about a whole day, from script to editing, although I spent 3 hours on editing the video because windows movie maker can't sync audio well so you have to rewatch the whole thing until you reach wherever you wanna cut.

And wow Dave Chappelle! I wouldn't be surprised if there was a hint of him since he's my favorite comedian in general, and I've watched all his specials and interviews that I could get my hands on. But he's a comic genius, I'm still learning. Hope I'll get there someday :D
 
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