My Channel Trailer

Thrashbat

Thrashbat

Thrashimation's Favorite Bat!
Hi good people of YTtalk,

I am hoping for a review of my channel trailer. I'd love to hear the feedback and would like to understand what people would like to see more of and see less of in the future. What looked good, what looked bad, what made you laugh, what you didn't understand. Thank you!

[DOUBLEPOST=1380496968,1380419356][/DOUBLEPOST]Any suggestions, anyone?
 
Hahaha this was awesome! Really well done! Seriously!

I wonder if there is a reverb-type affect you could add to the "Blow - Your - Mind" ? Other than that, REALLY amazing job!
 
Gamer Dad said:
Hahaha this was awesome! Really well done! Seriously!

I wonder if there is a reverb-type affect you could add to the "Blow - Your - Mind" ? Other than that, REALLY amazing job!
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Oh, well thank you very much! Yeah, if I could change one thing about it now, I'd make the letters in 'mind' go off the screen when they explode. I thought that having it turn red and sink would be a more cartoony effect, but now it just kind of seems... inconsistent. Still, I'm very proud of it :)
 
Yeahhh have the letters 'mind' blow up and put an explosion sound effect in it to make it even more dramatic. I must say I like the actual voice, have you done the voice yourself?
 
ARTFXSTUDIOS said:
Yeahhh have the letters 'mind' blow up and put an explosion sound effect in it to make it even more dramatic. I must say I like the actual voice, have you done the voice yourself?
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That was my partner and brother, Thrashdor who did the voice. He is a very talented voice actor - just wait for our shows to launch. He does over ten distinct voices!
 
I thought the beginning rating panel was actually pretty funny to read, but it kind of lost its glamor with the whole cartoon thing :/ not trying to be rude or anything. But the voice also got a little old after a few seconds, i think with a few better jokes (kicking the unicorn aside) and possibly spice up the cartoon? Make it look a little more real and you might have a kickass intro.
 
Oophilly215oO said:
I thought the beginning rating panel was actually pretty funny to read, but it kind of lost its glamor with the whole cartoon thing :/ not trying to be rude or anything. But the voice also got a little old after a few seconds, i think with a few better jokes (kicking the unicorn aside) and possibly spice up the cartoon? Make it look a little more real and you might have a kickass intro.
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I quite enjoyed making the rating panel. Animation isn't for everyone, but I'd give us another try. You'll notice we only showed one human -we actually specialize in how realistic our animation looks compared to most animation styles. And kicking unicorns is mean ;)
 
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