. You look and sound good/natural on camera and you picked a nice topic. The thing that could use a lot of improvement is the quality of the audio in the video. This video would have been so much better if all the sounds levels had been conscious choices and if they had been spot on. A few things that bothered me particularly: was that the volume of the commentary shifted around and was too low in places. Also, engine sounds are great but not when they prevent people from hearing the commentary. Engine sounds should generally be in the background and only take the spotlight on special occasions, such as when you did the 'I hate the loudness of your Mustang' segment. In that part it actually made sense to let the viewer have difficulties hearing you. I am by no means an audio expert but in your place I would have recorded the commentary and the engine sounds separately and then mix them to the right level. Last thing that could improve a little is the camerawork. It could have been a little tighter, less shaky, in my opinion. But don't take this criticism too harshly. These are just technical things that can be fixed if you want to. It is much more difficult for people to learn how to have creative ideas than it is for them to blush-up on their technical skills.hahaha I gotta say, Im certainly a sucker for sarcasm so you definitely got me there. Loved it. The ONLY thing i would mention is the audio was dare i say, pretty terrible. I could barley hear you speaking at some parts. You can pick up some pretty decent shotgun mic's for a good price that would drastically improve that audio quality. just google shotgun mic and you will find a whole bunch on amazon or B&H photoguys it would be amazing if i can get feedback on my latest video