Looking for a review on my travel vlog

[Elpixion]

Ok so once again my last review request was too long ago but that gave me time to (hopefully) improve my skills, during which time i went on a cruise and i've picked the best travel vlog (but if you want to do a review of the entire playlist then you can) so im not really looking for camera stability stuff cos my 3 point gimball is being shipped to me currently and my family is getting me a joby gorillapod so i've got those aspects covered, im looking for audio, video and sony vegas tips to improve my editing (and some good sub $150AUD action camera recommendations, yes it can be Chinese), any way without further ado here is my vlog 50 (milestone for me aswell ) travel vlog 6

 

[LostTrigger]

ok i only watched the first minute and that was enough for me.

the music is to loud, and due to the wind/background noise i had to turn the video down. and because your mic is low i can hear you now. so you have to work on balancing the audio/being louder yourself. dont flash the text on screen just leave it there for the whole fast forward or show it then put it away. your first destination is some place with turtles. i dont find turtles that interesting but you turn the camera around to what appears to be some type of beach and im slightly more interested. and then you cut to a different place. i didnt even know where you were. maybe you said it but i couldnt hear you. now your just "downtown" in the villa. come on bruh. you gotta talk about it. describe this place. what makes it unique. its a villa in some place i've never heard of before. i want you to talk about it man. and show me the good stuff. also dont have the camera stuck on you most of the time, show your surrounding as your walking.