Hey Ce3kay,
You can use programs like Paint.NET or GIPM as a substitute for Photoshop if you do not have it alredady to create some nice, simple and personalised channel art. You need to make yourself a banner, a better avatar picture, the one you have is good, but I am sure you can do better
Then thumbnails also need to be upgraded, there really is not much there to pull a viewer in, what is in the video, what do you talk about, a lot can be transferred through the picture without looking at the video tiitle, just by ussing facial experssions, adding picture/photos or what you go on about, and so much more.
The description also needs to have your social media accounts, so that users can connect with you. You can also add a subscribe link, links to shops, other channels, music that you use for intro/outro, messages/updates to your viewers, and a description of the video, at least for your own referance.
The video has quite a slow pace, which you could quicken by taking more away, doing some editing and cutting a few more of the silent moments. The quality I am obviously not sure how it will compare to the camera, however try to not record in dark environments, the quality of the video will be much higher, which will meant that you have to schedual the videos a bit better, where you taken them, when and so on.
Hope that helps
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