JOMIE: Internet Slang ( SKETCH COMEDY )

[Rails2Revolution]

Yo!
We have started a new comedy series now that we've had a few years experience with YouTube and we would love for you to check out our 3rd episode: "Internet Slang"

Check out the whole series HERE: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL3r4Jh2PF7ICSio9ljyxkqLznyMOYmc9w

I would LOVE the get some feedback too
Can't improve without first fixing mistakes after all

 

[Sabrina]

Hey guys! Here's my feedback: I liked it a lot. The acting was good and the filming looked professional (vibrant colors and all). The background added some realness to it, but at times it was distracting (when too many people walked past or it was too loud). Overall it was funny but in my opinion it dragged on a bit too long. Also, a punchline would have been nice. But I'm looking forward to seeing more.

 

[Rails2Revolution]

Hey guys! Here's my feedback: I liked it a lot. The acting was good and the filming looked professional (vibrant colors and all). The background added some realness to it, but at times it was distracting (when too many people walked past or it was too loud). Overall it was funny but in my opinion it dragged on a bit too long. Also, a punchline would have been nice. But I'm looking forward to seeing more.

Thanks!
Will take it into consideration for next time