Is this a good intro?

interesting video dude its really good, im not sure which part is the intro thou...the part with the cat...didnt really care for it. if the whole thing is the intro then its a bit long. if its a channel trailer then its very good. if that's what your channel is about then its good very intriguing and captivating. good job!!
 
Hoviking said:
Not an intro for like every video, but a start on this specific video
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Gotcha.

- Verticle video is an extreme no-no on platforms that aren't viewed on Snapchat or whatnot. Don't do verticle, stay horizontal.
- Intros should be teasers on what the person who just tuned in of what they'll see. You just rambled for 20 seconds. If they are here for speed drawing, they aren't there to see your cat.
- Keep the intro short, tell them what they'll see, and then go into the video. The intro should be 10 seconds, 15 max.
- If you want to discuss the equipment you use, that's great. Just do it during the speed drawing part, telling people your equipment list is in the description. That way if you ever want to go into affiliate links in the future, you are set up to do so.
 
Yeah try to never have black showing on the sides of the video, always have the video filling the whole frame, with the exception being letterboxed videos (you know, the videos with the "cinematic" black bars on the top and bottom). Besides that I would agree that it was a little long, intros should only be a few seconds cause you don't want to lose the viewer's interest. On a side not I recommend you upload a bit more often, your channel could use some more content to fill out that video tab
 
I think Chris pretty much said everything that needed to be said. tbh with you if you woulda just started with the speed drawing I would've been more excited. It seems like you put 2 different videos into one which is actually pretty confusing at least for me. As been said before Never have black bars it just looks unprofessional. I Suggest just showing your finished drawing with a desktop capture video while telling the audience what you drew and then transitioning to the speed drawing. If you wanna talk about your set up though I suggest making that another video because that's something other people will find very helpful especially if they wish to do something similar. On another note try and keep your intros consistent across all videos. It makes it obvious it's you for returning subscribers and anyone who watches multiple videos will know you because of your consistency.
 
Not bad.
The intro would def not make me click away, which is good.
The vertical filming tho would made me click away in a moment. Please dont do that lol.
 
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