intro review please

[ReptileFx]

thanks for the reply dude and no need to say sorry, opinions are opinions
i wanted truthful reviews,
how would you change the keyframing and colours?

The colours don't really match and i dont like the black outline thingy
Maybe take a Look at my stuff ?

 

[TheBoomwing]

The colours don't really match and i dont like the black outline thingy
Maybe take a Look at my stuff ?

seriously, dude, your stuff is amazeballs!!!...ok im going back to change mine up lol