Inexperienced Vlogger!! need help with content of video :)

[TheIntoxicatedGnomeArmy]

Hey there people of YTtalk :3
I used to do just gaming but recently went into vlogging and wanted to check with other more experienced vloggers what the content should be like within my vlog to help me with next time.
This is because me and my mate plan to travel soon and I want to know what I should include more / less off when making vlogs
Thanks

 

[Djopat Rey]

Hey Man,
Try putting stuff you did (Hopping fences or going into locations), while filming. Like eating a meal or cut to where your going to. Use multiple angles to show this.
An idea: Film everything that you do, and cut it out bad parts while editing.
Anyways have fun Vlogging!

 

[Bri Johnson]

Hey there people of YTtalk :3
I used to do just gaming but recently went into vlogging and wanted to check with other more experienced vloggers what the content should be like within my vlog to help me with next time.
This is because me and my mate plan to travel soon and I want to know what I should include more / less off when making vlogs
Thanks

Ok so a few things i would suggest; first off I'm not a professional vlogger I've only done one vlog (uploaded it today) but I've watched a lot of vlogs so i kind of know what I'm talking about haha one thing i would have liked to see is more conversation with the viewer, explaining exactly what you're doing, who you're with, where you're going. Also, it was hard to see what you were doing outside because it was so dark. I would suggest trying to purchase a camera light or something you can use that won't blind you but will make your video easier to see. Other than that just practice on another note though i am also looking for some constructive criticism on my first vlog so if you wouldn't mind checking it out and giving feed back that would be amazing

 

[Djopat Rey]

Ok so a few things i would suggest; first off I'm not a professional vlogger I've only done one vlog (uploaded it today) but I've watched a lot of vlogs so i kind of know what I'm talking about haha one thing i would have liked to see is more conversation with the viewer, explaining exactly what you're doing, who you're with, where you're going. Also, it was hard to see what you were doing outside because it was so dark. I would suggest trying to purchase a camera light or something you can use that won't blind you but will make your video easier to see. Other than that just practice on another note though i am also looking for some constructive criticism on my first vlog so if you wouldn't mind checking it out and giving feed back that would be amazing

Hey Your Style is a traditional vlog.
Just some points
-Never tell the audience in text
-If you make a mistake always check your screen if it's out of focus (I fall in these problems too)
- The cuts are uneven
-But the content is good
-I don't know what camera you're using but I think you need to invest some money for the future vlogs

Disclaimer I am not a professional vlogger, but you can check out my stuff and give me feed back would be nice

 

[Bri Johnson]

Hey Your Style is a traditional vlog.
Just some points
-Never tell the audience in text
-If you make a mistake always check your screen if it's out of focus (I fall in these problems too)
- The cuts are uneven
-But the content is good
-I don't know what camera you're using but I think you need to invest some money for the future vlogs

Disclaimer I am not a professional vlogger, but you can check out my stuff and give me feed back would be nice

Thank you for the advice and yes I'm going to invest in a better camera in December, right now all I have is my phone haha how would you suggest i fix my editing? I'm using Windows Live Movie Maker and all i know to do is split the scene and delete out what i don't want. Is there something else you think I could do that would be better?

 

[Djopat Rey]

Thank you for the advice and yes I'm going to invest in a better camera in December, right now all I have is my phone haha how would you suggest i fix my editing? I'm using Windows Live Movie Maker and all i know to do is split the scene and delete out what i don't want. Is there something else you think I could do that would be better?

Hey
Using Windows movie maker is one of the lowest editing software I ever used, I only used it for 2 videos that i made. You can always get davinci resolve for free from their website (it's a bit advanced) or find a free version of powerdirector to edit your videos.
Also cutting videos need transitions, cuts are only good if you know how to play it well. It doesn't work if it's not
continuous.
My Examples of continuous shots:
Short:

Vlog: