I'd Like Some Tips

[wonderwonderwonderman]

Heyyo, I'm your friendly neighborhood wonderwonderwonderman...ok forget it. Who am I kidding?

I'd like some tips/help as to what I need to improve. Right now I know my branding is a bit...meh so I don't need help with that.

I have a new outro in this vid:

so give me your opinion on that.

Stuff to review:
-How well I engage my audience
-SEO, titles, tags, and descriptions
-Thumbnails
-Channel in general and anything else you think of.

Thanks bunches!

 

[mercmonster]

Hey man, I don't have sound right now since I'm at work, but just in terms of art, it looks good, pretty big and eyecatching. You seem to have some experience with editing, as your in-game graphics also work with what you're doing. I like the length of your video, and it's good you have an outro! So all in all, good stuff! Sorry I can't give more feedback right now!