I would love some review on this video!

Hello! Initial reaction, overall I'd give it a 6 or a 7 out of ten. You have some great chemistry with the people you're playing with, and it comes across very nice. Some of the points for improvement are definitely in the sound. One of the most important things (for me) when I watch a video is the sound quality, and your voice comes across muffled. If possible, I'd recommend a different mic. I use a Blue Snowball, it's about $50 and is really good for how cheap it is. Other than that, my only real recommendation is maybe cutting down a bit. It seems like you would benefit really well from a "Highlight reel" Kind of thing. So maybe put some time in post to find the funny bits, and cut out the downtime. That way you're focusing on what's really catching your audience and you'll get some good laughs (because your funny bits are legitimately funny). Also, a few subtitles to highlight your whitty bits couldn't hurt, just don't make them too obtrusive. Some popular YouTubers I'd recommend to get a feel for what I mean would be SovietWomble and VannossGaming. Overall, it's a great video with some good points, but there's room for improvement. Keep it up :)
 
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