I love the lighting, bg, and video quality. All very crisp and clean. What camera do you use to record?
I like the short teaser before your intro slate.
Video is a little long for my taste, tbh. I like videos between 3-5 mintues.
I like the cut scenes at the beginnign with the girl and guy. Couldn't understand what the girl said at the beginning, so maybe be sure to enunciate. How did you edit the voices btw? as the video went on, the guy/girl commentary got too be a bit too much.
the text on the screen is nice. It gives the video more energy.
your voice is a little deadpan. I'd like a little more energy, but that's negotiable if this is your style.
when you do the zoom with text on screen, it gets a little distracting. I would stick with just a close-up shoot, minus the movement, if you have text on screen too.
i like the sound effects when you put your goggles on.
the ending was funny. :]