i need some feedback on my video

Sun The Gamer

Sun The Gamer

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hello everyone i uploaded a video and i wanted some feedback on if the intro was too long and if it was funny enough to watch until the actual gameplay and was the audio sometimes too loud the intro is 2:30 minutes long so if you could just watch for that long and give me some feedback about it i would really appreciate it thank you

the video
https://t.co/bSWDq50YtL
 
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1. I think it's pretty cool that you're mentioning your subs even if you are small. It shows you care. I don't think it's too long. XD It's a good way to connect with subs. I thought about doing this but was too shy. I also thought it was engaging.
As for the rest of the video
2. I feel like adding more sentences would be more engaging. You say a lot of single words. Instead of saying "Run," You could draw it out and say "Run Lara run," or with "What?" you could say, "What is this?" or "What is going on?" making more of a sentence keeps things more engaging.
 
thank you for replying i like mentioning subscribers because it is fun and yes engaging and now that i'm looking back at that video i think you are right i should be adding more sentences this is why i asked for feedback on how to make my videos better thank you again for taking the time to write that
 
hey man, look you got a nive chanel there
i would like to share my opinion with you
so i think that if you speak a lil bit faster and with more emotion it would do magic on your vids and draw more attention and interest
 
i'm not gonna lie i am still a bit shy but i know i will get out of this stage but one of the things holding me back is i don't want my friends to hear me because as of right now i'm staying at a friends house and i'm recording in their laundry room lol just trying to get my point across thanks for the feedback appreciate it
 
Love your humor and editing! I don't watch tomb raider, but I shall subscribe because of your humor! Who knows, maybe i'll get interested in the game. :);)
 
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