I have a new video but I NEED to be told what I can improve on

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harvOGK12

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I just uploaded a new video and I need people who are not scared to tell me whats wrong with the video so I can improve, the people around me just say its great but that will not help me improve link:
:) thank you and much love
 
okay, so I can not understand a lot of what you're saying, not because of your accent but because of the speed at which you are speaking. Try to slow down a little bit. Volumes also a problem, you're a bit too quiet and the videos a little louder so I have to keep adjusting the volume to hear things, you need to find a balance between the video volume and your commentary volume. Other than those two things I think the content was good, sort of a memeulous style of video which I enjoy :)
 
Xeros said:
okay, so I can not understand a lot of what you're saying, not because of your accent but because of the speed at which you are speaking. Try to slow down a little bit. Volumes also a problem, you're a bit too quiet and the videos a little louder so I have to keep adjusting the volume to hear things, you need to find a balance between the video volume and your commentary volume. Other than those two things I think the content was good, sort of a memeulous style of video which I enjoy :)
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Thank you I have made a note on that and will start playing around with volumes and speeds thank you so much for your feeback <3 and if you need me for something feel free to let me know
 
Well here's some stuff; not trying to be rude or anything.

Thumbnail, it's OK, but ... it kinda looks like a common CS:GO gamer thumbnail (like the most generic version of it) , which would be OK if the video was about kids in CS:GO but then you were basically roasting so the thumbnail could've used some more uniqueness/color/personality/etc. Least that's how I see it, I came in expecting some rapping kids in CS:GO and got something completely different. The title too lacks the sarcastic charm to it.

Commentary is relatively decent, however in the beginning you were going 100mph and there was a moment where your voice hit pre-puberty which was kinda funny tbh, but weird too. You sound mature overall (idk how old you are assuming it isn't 13), but then your voice cracks at the one part and it's like wth lol.

Also in your outro you lost all the energy in your voice so the comparison was like going from someone cranked up on cocaine to a coma patient, flat lined hardcore. Try to give the same level of energy from Start to Finish.

But yeah... overall the content was good, minor flaws to it.
 
Sin B said:
Well here's some stuff; not trying to be rude or anything.

Thumbnail, it's OK, but ... it kinda looks like a common CS:GO gamer thumbnail (like the most generic version of it) , which would be OK if the video was about kids in CS:GO but then you were basically roasting so the thumbnail could've used some more uniqueness/color/personality/etc. Least that's how I see it, I came in expecting some rapping kids in CS:GO and got something completely different. The title too lacks the sarcastic charm to it.

Commentary is relatively decent, however in the beginning you were going 100mph and there was a moment where your voice hit pre-puberty which was kinda funny tbh, but weird too. You sound mature overall (idk how old you are assuming it isn't 13), but then your voice cracks at the one part and it's like wth lol.

Also in your outro you lost all the energy in your voice so the comparison was like going from someone cranked up on cocaine to a coma patient, flat lined hardcore. Try to give the same level of energy from Start to Finish.

But yeah... overall the content was good, minor flaws to it.
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Thank you!! for real this should help a bunch! I have taken note of the point you have given and will work on and you have given me a bunch of good advice like the thumbnail stuff i havent heard anyone speak on the thumbnails to me before[DOUBLEPOST=1479748854,1479748830][/DOUBLEPOST]
Xeros said:
Its all good bro! just tryna help :)
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Much love bro <3
 
harvOGK12 said:
Thank you!! for real this should help a bunch! I have taken note of the point you have given and will work on and you have given me a bunch of good advice like the thumbnail stuff i havent heard anyone speak on the thumbnails to me before[DOUBLEPOST=1479748854,1479748830][/DOUBLEPOST]
Much love bro <3
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No problem! Probably because the thumbnails themselves aren't bad, just to me personally they lack personality and could use some more "spark" even a small modification can go a long way with these things.
 
Sin B said:
No problem! Probably because the thumbnails themselves aren't bad, just to me personally they lack personality and could use some more "spark" even a small modification can go a long way with these things.
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yeah i get that i will be working on them and hopefully my stuff becomes more entertaining to others
 
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