I could use your support :)

[RodakTV]

Hey everyone, RodakTV here. I could use your feedback to improve my channel! I've already taken some steps to do this, but could use your suggestions too!

Here's what I've done so far:
Started working on improving my thumbnails(current ones are simple)
Purchased better microphone
Purchased Xbox one S and elgato to record high quality videos while I'm deployed(I'm in the US Army)
Studying my analytics to improve
Networking on several different platforms
Reaching out to sponsorships

So that's what I've been doing, but could still really use your tips and suggestions!

Here's a video to give you an idea about what my videos were like before I started heavily trying to improve.

 

[ggdeeofficial]

it looks good. I don't really like the commentary on top of gameplay format. I think it takes away from the game you are actually playing. but if it works for your channel keep doing it! other than that I would recommend adding an end screen just for additional views or subs. good luck!