I am trying to push my editing in my videos, and I would love to get feedback!

[DieMan]

As title says

My newest video was the first one to hit +50 views! (Woohoo!). I spend more time than usual on editing and voice over, and I feel like it payed off, but I still feel like my editing could use some improvement.

Therefore I would like to get feedback on:

1. The editing - Was there a part you liked or disliked, and why?
2. My voice - Was there a part you liked or disliked, and why?
3. The comedy - Was there a part you liked or disliked, and why?

Of course, if you have any other pointers, I would love to hear them as well.

Thanks in advance!

/Die Man

 

[PansGaming]

Hey man! How's it going?
I gave the video a watch and I'll try and answer your questions as best I can.

1. The editing - Was there a part you liked or disliked, and why?

I think the editing was pretty good. I liked the text that popped up, it was big enough to easily read and the colours were well chosen to have good contrast against the background. There wasn't really a part I disliked at all. I think it was well edited, better than a lot of small channels and maybe better than some of the bigger ones too. Good job.

2. My voice - Was there a part you liked or disliked, and why?

Your Waluigi impressions were good, and your general commentary voice is easy to listen to and overall enjoyable.

3. The comedy - Was there a part you liked or disliked, and why?

The comedy was okay. It's not generally my humour but it wasn't offensive and I was able to watch all the way through the video without getting bored so that's a plus.

Overall it's a nice video. Even though I didn't know the game I found it easy to watch and enjoyable. Keep it up

 

[DieMan]

Hey man! How's it going?
I gave the video a watch and I'll try and answer your questions as best I can.

1. The editing - Was there a part you liked or disliked, and why?

I think the editing was pretty good. I liked the text that popped up, it was big enough to easily read and the colours were well chosen to have good contrast against the background. There wasn't really a part I disliked at all. I think it was well edited, better than a lot of small channels and maybe better than some of the bigger ones too. Good job.

2. My voice - Was there a part you liked or disliked, and why?

Your Waluigi impressions were good, and your general commentary voice is easy to listen to and overall enjoyable.

3. The comedy - Was there a part you liked or disliked, and why?

The comedy was okay. It's not generally my humour but it wasn't offensive and I was able to watch all the way through the video without getting bored so that's a plus.

Overall it's a nice video. Even though I didn't know the game I found it easy to watch and enjoyable. Keep it up

Thanks for the feedback Pans I’ll do my best to keep it up!

/Die Man

 

[GiggaVega]

This was pretty good. I'm guessing you added your voice over during the editing? I usually do this during my livestreams when in multiplayer.
I like the "Kill the animal abuser. Kill his horse too!"
I just subscribed to your channel, I you are definitely putting in the effort. Keep going.

 

[DieMan]

This was pretty good. I'm guessing you added your voice over during the editing? I usually do this during my livestreams when in multiplayer.
I like the "Kill the animal abuser. Kill his horse too!"
I just subscribed to your channel, I you are definitely putting in the effort. Keep going.

Thanks for the response Gigga! Yea I did add my voice during editing, I liked the result of it more, since I find it hard to comment and be energetic over several hours while recording

And thank you for the sub as well! Really appreciated!

 

[GiggaVega]

Thanks for the response Gigga! Yea I did add my voice during editing, I liked the result of it more, since I find it hard to comment and be energetic over several hours while recording

And thank you for the sub as well! Really appreciated!

It does take some practice to be off the cuff and interact with others.
I won't post my link on your thread but go check out my latest stream Black Ops3 to see how I do it.