How's the Wortermelon vibe feeling?

[Wortermelon]

Hey Guys,

So thought I'd come here and ask you to check out my branding and design. It was stuff that started as placeholders, but slowly stuck. So I made a video intro, and am in the process of designing a regular and recognisable thumbnail design.

Any and all feedback is appreciated. I've tried to go for a more pleasant, softer look rather then the steel/hard look you usually see. I feel it's a bit fresher.

Thanks guys!

Rik

 

[MegaFlummoxed]

I really really like the concept and colour. Your avatar is perfect. For me with a smallish monitor some of the background is cut off so I only see the end of wortermelon so it looks a little funny. If it was me I would also add maybe a few more watermelons or something to the background so it's not quite so plain. The intro is nice but a bit of movement would improve it in my opinion.

 

[mattv2099]

Watermelon?

They blow up real good.

 

[Wortermelon]

I really really like the concept and colour. Your avatar is perfect. For me with a smallish monitor some of the background is cut off so I only see the end of wortermelon so it looks a little funny. If it was me I would also add maybe a few more watermelons or something to the background so it's not quite so plain. The intro is nice but a bit of movement would improve it in my opinion.

Thanks for this feedback, glad you like it! I'm currently trying to find someone who can do some basic animation to make my intros a bit better, so hopefully will be all over that later. I might take your advice on the background up, make it a bit more inviting!

Watermelon?

They blow up real good.

That they do, my friend.

That, they, do.