1. Intro piano much lower
2. You sometimes look at the camera than back at the paper really fast... and then back at the camera.
3. Make it a bit more ... dynamic, fast...
I personally found it boring, wasn't interested in watching till the end. Only watched that little bit so I can give you some pointers. Probably others will just close the video.
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