Hows my new intro?

Th3StuffShow

Th3StuffShow

YTtalk Monster
1st Version/ DELETED

2nd version

Let me know what you think please. Could it use something else? any feedback is appreciated.

thanks
 
I don't really like the singer.

Seriously though, I really like the clips, they have a really fun nostalgic feel to them, but I feel like the transitions don't really work that well. Like with the swipes and it reveals black in the background (if you get what I mean). That doesn't look neat. It would have been better if the transitions were a bit smoother. It would be more interesting with some text on there, with a font that was really retro, That would add to the 'feel' I think you were going for. I personally feel like it's a tad bit long, but that's up to what you like. :D

Hopefully I make sense.

Edit: I just rewatched it and the transitions are fine, it was just that one time in the beginning. But, yeah, my biggest critique would be that it's too long.
 
Stef said:
I don't really like the singer.

Seriously though, I really like the clips, they have a really fun nostalgic feel to them, but I feel like the transitions don't really work that well. Like with the swipes and it reveals black in the background (if you get what I mean). That doesn't look neat. It would have been better if the transitions were a bit smoother. It would be more interesting with some text on there, with a font that was really retro, That would add to the 'feel' I think you were going for. I personally feel like it's a tad bit long, but that's up to what you like. :D

Hopefully I make sense.

Edit: I just rewatched it and the transitions are fine, it was just that one time in the beginning. But, yeah, my biggest critique would be that it's too long.
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You do, you do! I think you're right, I'll try to remove the spots where we see black and Ill try to find a better font. Not sure what fonts will be retro looking though.
 
It is a tad long, but i love the song so much and don't want to cut anything out. I mean it's already edited, i was much longer. lol

I'm thinking that I could modify it for each episode and insert the episode number and shows ill be reviewing to hopefully make the length of the song seems more appropriate
 
oh i only saw the first version when I watched but the black parts you can just stuff more footage back there :) (of course I tend to at times enjoy making very "busy" videos) Or make a logo mat for the back.

watched the second one that is nice I think i like that one better even if you did stuff something behind to fill the black not sure.. :)
 
urbanlamb said:
oh i only saw the first version when I watched but the black parts you can just stuff more footage back there :) (of course I tend to at times enjoy making very "busy" videos) Or make a logo mat for the back.
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check the second one.. got rid of all the black i think
 
yeah just watched it now i like that one :). I have something similar I do and for "masterpieces theatre" I ran a clip in the back and had all the little clips over top and blurred the back clip. Same idea though a classic footage colage. :)
 
Th3StuffShow said:
thanks.. i think thats what Ill use... ps sorry i haven't read the script yet. ill get on it tomorrow!
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Actually I got someone to do the voice part I wasn't sure if you had time to do it and if it sits to long I forget what I was doing in the first place hehe. So the work is done next time I can give more warning this was a last minute change as originally I was going to just do all the voices myself but thought better of it :)
 
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