How Can I Make This Better

[Life of Brendan]

So being in the Army I have some pretty unique opportunities to record some pretty cool stuff. My latest video has several clips of my squad (Army term not slang) shooting some 105mm Artillery. I just want to know how I can make my videos better using the awesome recordings I can get

Here's my most recent video so you can see what I'm talking about

All feedback is much appreciated!

 

[Anjim]

You did great man and keep it up! you might get alot of subs

 

[Life of Brendan]

You did great man and keep it up! you might get alot of subs

Thanks I appreciate it. I think I've come a long way but want to be sure to keep improving