Honest critique on my Haul?

[Irahs]

Hey everyone! I just posted my first yt video today and I really want some critiques, I think the awkwardness will go away with time, but something about the video is lackluster to me.

Any suggestions?

 

[Yoursharkfriend]

First of all, you are so gorgeous girl!
Second, I like you video, of course if you never modeled before it's going to seem super weird at first. I was the same way and honestly probably still the same lol. Same with commentary, eventually with practice and more experience your commentary will get better.

 

[Irahs]

First of all, you are so gorgeous girl!
Second, I like you video, of course if you never modeled before it's going to seem super weird at first. I was the same way and honestly probably still the same lol. Same with commentary, eventually with practice and more experience your commentary will get better.

Thanks so much :3

Yeah, I filmed another video and while I was still awkward, I felt a little less self conscious.