Guys, I need your help

[SpruceFish]

After a lot of lazy editing, I have finally decided to spend some more time editing my videoes. I really need some thoughts on this

 

[mirrorlessNY(youtuber)]

It's long & has cursing in it. The game seems to have interesting aspects to it like slow motion, but there plenty of fast movement which makes me dizzy. Thumbnail design is a plus.