Give me feedback on my first video ?

[League of ADC]

Well this is the first video, i have ever created! do you have any ideas on how i could improof my video quality ? please tell me.

 

[Atomicred]

Great video better video then I created the first time, and watch your music in the beginning maybe copyrighted.

 

[MudanTV]

Maybe add some commentary or titles to make it more interesting for the viewer.

 

[Ovidelele]

Maybe add some tags to get more views.

 

[listed]

You need to talk over the video. Keep the viewer hooked with the action.