Gaming Comedy Video Review

DieMan

DieMan

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So I am currently experimenting heavily with the amount of editing I am doing in my videos. Just released a new one yesterday: Link To Video. I would really appreciate it if i could get some feedback on it.

Also, I would like feedback on the humor in general. What worked for you/what didn't?

Finally, is there anything where you thought "damn, this would be so much better if..."

Thanks in advance!

/Die Man

*Edit: Holy Sh*t i forgot the link. I suck. Thanks @Destroyer30i6 for pointing it out*
 
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I watched the video, great concept, but I would have done it as it's own video so you didn't have to show game footage

Bits I loved
  • The character introductions - but I would have made it a little quicker (snappy)
  • Some of the lines about the tank and situations
  • The edits are decent
  • Audio is good
Things I would have changed
  • I would have edited the characters doing the stuff you said they did, like make the hillbilly character do stupid stuff like running into zombies ... a good example would be "Tip 2: Stay Calm!" "It is always important to stay calm.. let's stay quiet" ... "where's hillbilly?" .. then have him run screaming into the zombies.. and then have him do that more than once, but a few scenes apart.. just an example
  • Made the video just about zombies survival, I think you have an opportunity to make this really good, you already have great bits in there
Hope this helps, if you ever want any advice or anything about videos or anything just drop me a message and I am always happy to help :)
 
Thanks for another round of feedback dude ;) It is highly appreciated.

I really agree on your comment on the roles. It would have made sense to actually use that later in the video. Looking at it I can se I kinda set something up that I did not return to.

Also I still think my edits could be sharper and more polished, but I hope to improve over time.

I will definitely message you if I have questions, thanks for the offer.You are of course welcome to do the same.

looking forward to your next video!
 
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