Full channel review please :)

oasis gamer

oasis gamer

OasisGaming
Hey, please may i request a full channel review commenting on the following:
-Channel art, including thumbnail banners and PP
-My introduction video
-The zombie storyline(because i put alot of time and effort into that video)
Also if there is anything i can do to improve my overall channel

THANKYOU! :):):)
 
oasis gamer said:
Hey, please may i request a full channel review commenting on the following:
-Channel art, including thumbnail banners and PP
-My introduction video
-The zombie storyline(because i put alot of time and effort into that video)
Also if there is anything i can do to improve my overall channel

THANKYOU! :):):)
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Ok starting with channel art. The "O" in Oasis Needs to be smaller it covers one of the pistols. Other than that Its awesome!. Thumbnails look great! Intro Video was well Done. But I highly
a Webcam!!. The Zombie Story line. I can see ALOT of work put into it. your viewers will too so they'll appreciate that. But think about it. I cant sit still for 26 minutes. Id prefer You break it up into 2-3 minute videos because that's the average attention span of viewers and itll keep the suspense/climax at a high! Overall You have it Kid! I believe in you man. Ill be watching your channel! btw If you want maybe review my channel too :). Alright Seeya!!
 
insendiTV said:
Ok starting with channel art. The "O" in Oasis Needs to be smaller it covers one of the pistols. Other than that Its awesome!. Thumbnails look great! Intro Video was well Done. But I highly
a Webcam!!. The Zombie Story line. I can see ALOT of work put into it. your viewers will too so they'll appreciate that. But think about it. I cant sit still for 26 minutes. Id prefer You break it up into 2-3 minute videos because that's the average attention span of viewers and itll keep the suspense/climax at a high! Overall You have it Kid! I believe in you man. Ill be watching your channel! btw If you want maybe review my channel too :). Alright Seeya!!
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thanks man and yeah ill review your channel, what areas do u want me to cover? :)
 
I am working on doing a review scorecard so here goes:
Quality: (10/10)
-Microphone: excellent quality (5/5)
-Video: excellent quality (5/5)

Performance: (7/10)
-Enthusiasm: Very Good (4/5)
-Voice: Good (3/5)

Content: (7.5/10)
Uniqueness: Average (2.5/5)
Skill: Excellent (5/5)

Art: (10/10)
Logo: Excellent (5/5)
Channel Art: Very Good (5/5)

Total: (34.5/40) B

Strengths: Your quality was fantastic. I couldn't find a single flaw there. Your art was amazing. You seemed to know a lot about what you were talking about, and you had high enthusiasm for what your videos.

Things to improve on: I know this isn't something that is necessarily in your control, but FPS channels are extremely common. I think your storyline video was very unique though. Also try to keep yourself from saying um and uh.

Overall, your channel is very good, and I think you have extremely high potential to become a highly subscribed channel. I know I don't really have any credentials to rate your channel, but I thought it was good. Best of luck in your future endeavors :)
 
shinyvictreebel said:
I am working on doing a review scorecard so here goes:
Quality: (10/10)
-Microphone: excellent quality (5/5)
-Video: excellent quality (5/5)

Performance: (7/10)
-Enthusiasm: Very Good (4/5)
-Voice: Good (3/5)

Content: (7.5/10)
Uniqueness: Average (2.5/5)
Skill: Excellent (5/5)

Art: (10/10)
Logo: Excellent (5/5)
Channel Art: Very Good (5/5)

Total: (34.5/40) B

Strengths: Your quality was fantastic. I couldn't find a single flaw there. Your art was amazing. You seemed to know a lot about what you were talking about, and you had high enthusiasm for what your videos.

Things to improve on: I know this isn't something that is necessarily in your control, but FPS channels are extremely common. I think your storyline video was very unique though. Also try to keep yourself from saying um and uh.

Overall, your channel is very good, and I think you have extremely high potential to become a highly subscribed channel. I know I don't really have any credentials to rate your channel, but I thought it was good. Best of luck in your future endeavors :)
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Thankyou man, i appreciate all of that feedback and i will most definitly take all of those very helpfull pieces of advice into account, THANKS AGAIN :) :) :)
 
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