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Callan Wills

Callan Wills

The Grandad.
There are a few crashes in the video, in which may be due to the video editing software I use (NCH VideoPad). Enjoy it as it may still be watchable haha.

 
*gonna preface my replies with the fact that I am new and not at all an authority on anything*

I like your video, and there are a couple issues I saw that I only noticed because I sometimes have them as well. The audio mixing needs work, as far as the music being much louder than the dialogue. Instead of turning the dialogue up, causing us to hear more background noise, I would turn the music down so that viewers can adjust their volume accordingly. (Ideally both you and I would have better audio equipment but for now I imagine it is what it is)

Also, the pacing. I feel like I sometimes drag on a bit, but that's not really acceptable considering we're fighting for viewers attention in a very saturated market of similar content. We gotta keep the good times comin post-haste.

Excellent thumbnail by the way.

Keep up the great work!
 
Chris the Swissmiss said:
*gonna preface my replies with the fact that I am new and not at all an authority on anything*

I like your video, and there are a couple issues I saw that I only noticed because I sometimes have them as well. The audio mixing needs work, as far as the music being much louder than the dialogue. Instead of turning the dialogue up, causing us to hear more background noise, I would turn the music down so that viewers can adjust their volume accordingly. (Ideally both you and I would have better audio equipment but for now I imagine it is what it is)

Also, the pacing. I feel like I sometimes drag on a bit, but that's not really acceptable considering we're fighting for viewers attention in a very saturated market of similar content. We gotta keep the good times comin post-haste.

Excellent thumbnail by the way.

Keep up the great work!
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I will have to get to know audio mixing a little more at the moment, as I still tend to struggle with the software haha. There does seem to be a few crashes at the moment when I use VideoPad, in which I will have to look in more. Thank you so much for the constructive criticism, as I will use your points to improve the next episode.

-Callan Wills

Sorry about the late reply, it's been a bit overwhelming with the assignments I am having to work on at college.
 
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