First Video Review

[Chubby5544]

I recently finished my first video since coming back and was wondering if I could get a review of the video.
I would especially like to know if

1. Is my thumbnail decent
2. Was it informative
3. What can be improved/ what is done well

Thank you in advance. Here is the Link:

 

[DeliciousCrackers]

Okay here goes honesty. 20 minutes for me is kinda too long for a video. I think if you scripted your commentary a bit more and talked a big faster you could've shortened the video, thus making it more "concentrated" with content. Instead of reading abilities, why don't you show them off with background explanation and in which situations these abilities are best used. In my opinion showing is much better than telling for the viewers.
Hope this helped somewhat!
Best of luck!

 

[Chubby5544]

Okay here goes honesty. 20 minutes for me is kinda too long for a video. I think if you scripted your commentary a bit more and talked a big faster you could've shortened the video, thus making it more "concentrated" with content. Instead of reading abilities, why don't you show them off with background explanation and in which situations these abilities are best used. In my opinion showing is much better than telling for the viewers.
Hope this helped somewhat!
Best of luck!

Thanks for the feedback. I do have one question though. How did you like the thumbnail? Did it look decent or what do I need to change?