One thing to look into with League since it's so long. Try to break it more into clips to cut down the size of the video. People that don't know you won't want to watch a 30 minute video not certain their gonna be entertained. Unless the viewer is hardcore into League then the farming lane can be rather boring to watch. For commentary, don't get down on yourself. Or if you do, try to be funny about it. Attitude is a big thing to keep the audience entertained. I like to play League, and I J4 is one of my favorite people to Jungle! I enjoyed watching your video though. But until you start to get a base audience, I would keep the videos around 10 to 15 minutes long.