Feedback on these short 5 seconds!

SmartTheDumb

SmartTheDumb

Loving YTtalk
Trying to make an intro for my videos. Not too happy with it. But I can't pinpoint what's bothering me. What do you think?

 
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After watching it for like 10 times cos I had the same problem you're having, i realized I was bothered by the lighting. The intro itself is really cute. Editing and music and all of that. But the first and the last part had this filter effect or whatever you did with it, and it made the contrast between you and everything else bigger. Basically it looks like the first and the last part were professionally edited colors wise, and the rest wasnt. Maybe thats it?
 
I did the coloring on purpose. The entry and last shot to look more dramatic, and the middle stuff to look more amateurish. I think that the flow rate between the scenes is what bothers me.
What do you think?

I'll change the color on the middle stuff and post a different version.
 
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I don't notice anything off about it, I think it's quite cool, but the music does seem too loud.
 
I think the lighting between all the clips have to be consistant. Otherwise I think the music, the length and edit is really good.
 
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