Feedback on my videos/channel?

[RattlidgeGaming]

Hey guys how's it going? I've now got 6 videos up on YouTube and It's hard to tell whether I'm actually improving, or getting worse. Who knows? Well, I'm hoping you guys do. I'd love if you guys could take a moment to check out my channel, the videos and the design and let me know just what you think, either here or in the comments section of the videos. Thanks!

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsnTEprurg_48mE_MvEjIWw

 

[MattyGreen]

Here we go:

• Your banner is okay, it's a really generic photo though and I've seen it a lot around the internet. Maybe get something made or have ago yourself.
• Your thumbnails needs improving, some of them it's hard to read and some look like they don't have custom thumbnails on them. Just take some more time to make them and you'll be good! Remember the thumbnail is what draws the viewer in.
• Your commentary on videos is good but you need to improve the text in some videos because it's kinda hard to read and just an outline around it will make it pop more.
• Maybe make some playlists and section off your content to make it cleaner and more accessible.
• Another point on commentary is that your voice is pretty quite, turn it up a bit.

Overall, pretty good. Just could use improvements in areas I noted above. Hope this helps!

 

[RattlidgeGaming]

Here we go:

• Your banner is okay, it's a really generic photo though and I've seen it a lot around the internet. Maybe get something made or have ago yourself.
• Your thumbnails needs improving, some of them it's hard to read and some look like they don't have custom thumbnails on them. Just take some more time to make them and you'll be good! Remember the thumbnail is what draws the viewer in.
• Your commentary on videos is good but you need to improve the text in some videos because it's kinda hard to read and just an outline around it will make it pop more.
• Maybe make some playlists and section off your content to make it cleaner and more accessible.
• Another point on commentary is that your voice is pretty quite, turn it up a bit.

Overall, pretty good. Just could use improvements in areas I noted above. Hope this helps!

Thanks for the feedback!

• I'm working on the banner currently, hoping to get something up by this weekend!
• The thumbnails do need working on yes, once I get hold of photoshop they'll be improved!
• For commentaries, I'm working on increasing the volume to try and engage more!

 

[MattyGreen]

Thanks for the feedback!

• I'm working on the banner currently, hoping to get something up by this weekend!
• The thumbnails do need working on yes, once I get hold of photoshop they'll be improved!
• For commentaries, I'm working on increasing the volume to try and engage more!

Awesome! Good luck with everything!

 

[SoleilTech]

× I agree with the previous poster, your banner could stand out more. It could be simple, with just your name, posting schedule, and a couple of words describing the kind of videos you make.

× I really like your call to action at the end of the Trials Evolution video, but it seemed like a lot of directions given at once. Maybe try to single out one or two actions you want the viewers to do, like "Like and Subscribe".

× You don't really need PhotoShop to make good, eye catching thumbnails. There are lots of free & open source programs that do the same thing, like GIMP, PicMonkey, and Canva.

× Your commentary is pretty good! Audio quality is nice, and I could understand you fine.

You're doing well so far. Stay consistent and don't be afraid to try new things. I hope this helps!

 

[RattlidgeGaming]

× I agree with the previous poster, your banner could stand out more. It could be simple, with just your name, posting schedule, and a couple of words describing the kind of videos you make.

× I really like your call to action at the end of the Trials Evolution video, but it seemed like a lot of directions given at once. Maybe try to single out one or two actions you want the viewers to do, like "Like and Subscribe".

× You don't really need PhotoShop to make good, eye catching thumbnails. There are lots of free & open source programs that do the same thing, like GIMP, PicMonkey, and Canva.

× Your commentary is pretty good! Audio quality is nice, and I could understand you fine.

You're doing well so far. Stay consistent and don't be afraid to try new things. I hope this helps!

I agree that the banner and thumbnails are the things that need improving, I'd say more urgently than anything, so they're my main focus! But otherwise, thanks for your feedback, I'll take it all on board and hopefully it will improve my fortunes and make my channels and videos even better!