Feedback on my video

[Jake103]

Alright. So 2 weeks ago I made this video and I want feedback on it. I titled this how can I improve, because I want your feedback for improvements. I plan on making another video like this . If your providing feedback it can't be about the music I picked, because it's suppose to be that music for a reason. I spent 4 days working on this video 2 weeks ago.

I just wanna say that making this wasn't easy and I really tried to squeeze in those camera angles. So just leave feedback on anything in the video that needs improving besides the music ok. I'm working on another video like this at the moment and I want some feedback on this one. I tried making this one entertaining and that's my goal. A lot of my other videos on my channel are good, but not very entertaining. I think this is a video with a lot of entertainment in it. Leave some feedback on the video and I'll consider it for my future uploads.

Video:

[DOUBLEPOST=1478268834,1478241329][/DOUBLEPOST]Also if anyone has any tips then pm.

 

[Cody Letwinch]

Alright. So 2 weeks ago I made this video and I want feedback on it. I titled this how can I improve, because I want your feedback for improvements. I plan on making another video like this . If your providing feedback it can't be about the music I picked, because it's suppose to be that music for a reason. I spent 4 days working on this video 2 weeks ago.

I just wanna say that making this wasn't easy and I really tried to squeeze in those camera angles. So just leave feedback on anything in the video that needs improving besides the music ok. I'm working on another video like this at the moment and I want some feedback on this one. I tried making this one entertaining and that's my goal. A lot of my other videos on my channel are good, but not very entertaining. I think this is a video with a lot of entertainment in it. Leave some feedback on the video and I'll consider it for my future uploads.

Video:

[DOUBLEPOST=1478268834,1478241329][/DOUBLEPOST]Also if anyone has any tips then pm.

Hi Jake! I see you havent had any feedback on it, so ill give it a shot.

Ill start by saying however, Im not into gaming videos so I know Im not the target demographic you're looking for. That leads me to this, what is the demographic? I know my brother is in to gaming, and sometimes likes to watch videos on strategies etc, but I'm not sure what about the video will make people want to see more. I think there needs to be something they are getting out of the video and not just watching somebody else play a game and do things with different characters.

That being said, the video itself is done nicely, and I actually was a fan of the music to begin with, so don't worry about that. It kind of reminds me of the IGN videos where they show certain characters in upcoming games.

I wish I could give more feedback, or better advice, but it isnt exactly my niche.

Goodluck with the next video!

 

[Jake103]

Hi Jake! I see you havent had any feedback on it, so ill give it a shot.

Ill start by saying however, Im not into gaming videos so I know Im not the target demographic you're looking for. That leads me to this, what is the demographic? I know my brother is in to gaming, and sometimes likes to watch videos on strategies etc, but I'm not sure what about the video will make people want to see more. I think there needs to be something they are getting out of the video and not just watching somebody else play a game and do things with different characters.

That being said, the video itself is done nicely, and I actually was a fan of the music to begin with, so don't worry about that. It kind of reminds me of the IGN videos where they show certain characters in upcoming games.

I wish I could give more feedback, or better advice, but it isnt exactly my niche.

Goodluck with the next video!

It's suppose to be a cinematic. A lot of youtubers do these type of videos and they get popular. Videos of a video game don't necessarily need to be gameplay videos in order to earn subs.