feedback on my newest video?

[ermayzing]

I just recently made a new video, and for some reason I'm extremely proud of it and I was wondering if I could get some feedback on it? Basically a review of the content, editing, etc. that stuff c:

the video:

Thank you in advance! ^-^

 

[Jawad Soomro]

Your banner is simply awesome
You need to work more on your thumbnails dude
Your confidence level is AWESOME
Make intro and outro for ur videos
Your sound quality is clear but try to remove the reverbs and echos

 

[mercmonster]

Jawad's feedback is great, I do think your personality is very fun and it shines through in your work. You mentioned a black blob on the side of the screen being a microphone - you can tweak that in post by zooming in ever so slightly so it's out of frame (but not so much so that you're reducing your video quality drastically). All in all, great job!