Feedback on my latest content

[Life of a Film maker]

Can you check out my latest video and give feedback or advice moving forward with the content? I think the main thing i need to work on from a production standpoint is audio. But as i do more videos i keep learning more and more so hope to get that down.

 

[Life of a Film maker]

Nothing? Lol

 

[The NotARubicon!]

Yup, definitley work on the audio. Try a lapel mic or a shotgun mic for dialog and try to dub-in some sounds - too much ambient noise through the whole video. Cleaning that up would make it a lot more professional..
Good camera work and editing. The only other thing i would say would be to shorten it/speed it up a tad.

 

[elPepin]

Some how you need to speed up the action at the beginning perhaps with faster editing (jump cuts)and sound effects?