Feedback on my first video :/

[Zakaria Oumimoun]

Hi guys, i made my first video everrr! lol i spent almost 24 hours on it and idk if it's good or not
please gimme some feedback.
thank you in advance.

 

[Christoverse]

Zakaria, Zakaria- well done my friend! I think this video is extremely brave and very altruistic of you so hats off there. Many people are afraid to touch such sensitive subjects, so content wise it is extraordinary. I appreciate your effort (24 hours wow!) and urge you to continue on more videos.

For feedback I'd say:
-start adding intros it can just be a short 2 second intro for your channel
-have an outro with call to action and even links to other videos
-in terms of this video I think it would have added even more effect to not have the hat (I know it's a self conscious thing, but to inspire people to be comfortable you showing your own head would give them ease. It is okay that you did not of course but for future videos perhaps)
-not necessary but you could try adding music very quietly in the background for effect
-add little animation titles or even 2d ie when you say "2 things" you can list them for a moment

Other than that I really loved this ambitious video and urge you to do more. Keep up the great work!

 

[Stephen1987]

Your video is good, you speak well and clearly know what you want to say, I don't see much pausing or hesitation, very nice.

That being said you are missing all the technical stuff, Look at lighting, look at an intro/outro, learn to edit, add annotations, background music... All those basics..

To be honest though, this will come it time, you will slowly learn, don't rush and do it all at once, chill take your time and grow as your channel grows, these tonnes of stuff I still don't do that I should learn or develop