Feedback on editing and commentating wanted

[Cheaty]

I know that i have many things i can improve, but since i am so new to youtube i want to improve commentating and editing first. So if you feel like i am yelling or singing too much, or i should take out parts of the video please tell me! I dont know how to make a perfect video and i am just trying stuff out so all negative feedback is greatly appreciated! If you want me to give my opinion on one of your videos i am happy to do that!

#feedback4feedback

 

[SmartTheDumb]

You see all that light on the back wall? Put it in your face. Sound is good, Image quality is good.
Your comments really are your own responsibility. You're the one to choose the message you want to get across to the audience.

 

[Cheaty]

alright! So light is your only pointer? You are right, commentating is my responsibility. When i think about it, its a really stupid thing to ask about! haha. Thanks for the advice! I will go lookup some tips for better light