Feedback Needed!
- Thread starter hdr
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Jack Decker
YTtalk Mad
Just some off-the-cuff thoughts.
1) It is odd you're wanting us to review Part 2 and not Part 1.
2) Delete the whine you start off the video with about people watching but not subscribing to your channel. No one likes a whiner.
3) No one in the US government viewed it as a threat. No one was concerned about it. At most they laughed. At worse it annoyed them.
4) Seems like a lot of pointless rambling on about Woodstock. I think the Fyre Festival would have been better to just focus on. You don't really need multiple analogies. Especially when those who were against the festival only mentioned the Fyre Festival.
5) This video could easily have be cut down to ten minutes, if not less. Woodstock part felt like filler.
1) It is odd you're wanting us to review Part 2 and not Part 1.
2) Delete the whine you start off the video with about people watching but not subscribing to your channel. No one likes a whiner.
3) No one in the US government viewed it as a threat. No one was concerned about it. At most they laughed. At worse it annoyed them.
4) Seems like a lot of pointless rambling on about Woodstock. I think the Fyre Festival would have been better to just focus on. You don't really need multiple analogies. Especially when those who were against the festival only mentioned the Fyre Festival.
5) This video could easily have be cut down to ten minutes, if not less. Woodstock part felt like filler.