Editing Feedback Required on Gaming Video

Huithril

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Hello All,

Thankyou for checking out this request for feedback and constructive criticism. My channel has not been out for long but the video link attached is the first video I have put time into the edit, to remove the 'dead air' bit where I am not speaking or nothing is happening. I'm aware my audio still need work and my apologies for that. I would really be interested to see the differences between Bioshock Part 2 (edited) and Part 1 (not really edited.)

Thankyou so much!

 

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think voice is fine, but the video is 27mins long, think a lot can be cut out like loading parts or moments where you were trying to figure something out
 

Huithril

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think voice is fine, but the video is 27mins long, think a lot can be cut out like loading parts or moments where you were trying to figure something out
I am personally looking to do decently length videos, although I appreciate it may not be some peoples cup of tea, I tend to play fairly long games. I had already cut out quite a bit of dead space, as mentioned up above.

Thanks for the feedback!