Editing Feedback on Recent Vids

[HippieOfTheYear]

Recently I've changed the way I've been editing my videos and it takes a little more time than what I had previously done but the viewer count seems to be increasing according to the analytics. I'm just wondering if there's anything more I should be doing to engage viewers so that they watch the video all the way until the end. Thanks in advance for anyone out there willing to help!


YouTube.com/hippieoftheyear

 

[Destroyer30i6]

Hey,

I watched a couple of your latest videos, I cannot comment on the content because I don't do unboxings or do make-up reviews.. but I can comment on other things which may help;

1. Thumbnails are good, eye catching and have go overlays on them, i would experiment with a different background for the thumbnails maybe
2. I can see some good video titles like the Mcdonald's one, that will get clicks and searches
3. some of the videos do seem a little long (but again it isn't my content) you could probably make some of the intros you do shorter. I felt with the latest unboxing you could have maybe made the intro shorter and more to the point (just my opinion
4. With the edits... you should maybe experiment using different colours, zooming in and out more, maybe some sound effects when something funny happens (like when you opened the door on your Boyfriend, a zoom in and a funny sound effect might have worked well)

As I said, I cannot comment on the content itself, and it looks like you are doing well for views, but I would try and branch out on the edits, you could put some really cool and fun add-ons into these videos

if you need to see some examples of the edits, I do them a lot in my videos (not a intended plug haha, but I do those types of edits and sound effects)

hope this helps


EDIT -- Just seen your popular videos, some of your bigger videos are short and have searchable titles, like the clinque stuff, also I can see some PewDiePie edits in there (what made you change your content?)