Could anyone review my video?

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screen.fanatics

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Hello, I just made a video where I review the classic movie trainspotting. The review is 2 minutes long and it is meant to be short. I was wondering could anyone watch it and give me there feedback on how I can improve it.
If you want I can do the same back.
Thanks.
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I think your Trainspotting review was perfect. I watched some other videos of yours too like BvS review and you definitely improved. It's concise, well scripted, well edited, and executed nicely. Just keep doing what you're doing because it's working. Good job!
 
Dude nice video. Your presentation was good and to have movie reviews only like a few minutes is something really unique and i think will definitely draw people's attention. My only concern is the voice audio... Something is odd about it and I wish I could describe it.. It sounds kinda muddy.. it makes u sound unclear at times and I know that it's not you. Just the audio itself. I wish i could help but i dont know to much about recording voice overs like that. I suggest asking people specifically about recording clean audio. Other than that the video itself was good and Its really good how concise and to the point it is. you summarize the movie well and it just works.

Find out how to record cleaner audio and/or how to clean up audio and I think you're good.
 
Really great video, the B-rolls match exactly to the voice over, like when you talk about Renton. Also it's a short and high speed video, so I'm not getting board but also understand every word.
One tip I can give you, is that if you already cover the credit with your watermark, then turn up the scale of the video so the original credit will disappear, it's not so ethical but if you already did it, then it's better that way ;)

Edit: I also don't really like the thumbnail, I, individually, thinks that best thumbnails contain 0-3 words because otherwise it's just small and overwhelming. I would put just something like "Trainspotting movie review", good luck! :)
 
Good. Real good. About the audio, I understood every word of it. You seem to have good diction, so any further audio processing will most likely not add too much to the audio clarity.
https://soundcloud.com/fernando-ascencao/voice-trainspotting
The audio characteristics imposed on your voice are clearly being done by your microphone. Which I'm guessing isn't too good. Or at least, not fitting to your voice type.
 
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