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[Charlarottskii]

Hi everyone, I recently made my first short film, and would really appreciate some feedback on the edit, filming, writing etc. I'd really like to know what people think, and how I can improve on videos in the future

Thanks for your time, I hope you enjoy!

 

[Goreness]

Congratulations on releasing your first short.

My main criticism is just that the sound effects are often overbearingly loud. In the first scene with the gaming it's almost hard to hear what's being said, and the beeping when a Choice is selected is too high pitched to be as loud as it is... if I was wearing headphones, I'd probably close the video after the beep in a panic.

... Haaaaa, the credits. I was like "Dang, British names sure sound a lot like Doctor Who charac-- Oh. Heh."

 

[Charlarottskii]

XD
But thanks for the feedback, I'll bear it in mind in future There are quite a few things I would have liked to do better, as my hard drive corrupted (ironically) and I lost my edit on the day of submission. I had to re-edit the entire thing as quick as possible, and so there are things - like the sound - that I didn't notice in my panic. I'll make sure that I double check the levels next time