brokenbanjoproductions
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our name is brokenbanjosketches and we are a new comedy sketch channel. we have made our first video and are looking for some feedback
thank you
thank you
constructive criticism needed please
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Natacha Martins
The First Lady of YTTALK
first of all, we have the same laptop xD
second, i thought it was really funny when the prostitute in the garbage through the rubbish back at the girl and called a man xD rofl
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second, i thought it was really funny when the prostitute in the garbage through the rubbish back at the girl and called a man xD rofl
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Symph
I'm a dude with a face and I know how to use it.
Yeah, that part made me laugh, but the rest of it I couldn't make heads or tails of what was going on. He called a prostitute and paid her in candy? That's basically all the plot I could derive and for the most part it didn't seem comical to me. I think I may have just not understood what was going on, I had a little trouble deciphering your scottish accents (I assume they are scottish) so... As far as constructive, I would say to make your plots and lines a little more obvious so it's easier to follow what is going on, and then I'm just gonna have to wait and see another video to know what I really think. You're probably a funny channel and I just didn't get what was going on in this video, probably.